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2018-03-29, 07:10 PM
(2018-03-29, 07:04 PM)TayNinh Wrote: Ngoài sân gió mát trăng thanh
Cá Koi một đám lượn quanh trong hồ
Trên cây chim hót nỉ non
Lòng nghe mát rượi như dòng suối mơ
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-Rặn mãi mới được 4 câu

mới tập thì 4 câu là khá rồi TayNinh

Nhưng trong thơ lục bát, chữ cuối của câu 2 và chữ cuối của câu ba cùng vần
Chữ cuối của câu ba và chữ thứ sáu của câu 4 cùng vần  Cheer
APPROACH LOVE AND COOKING WITH RECKLESS ABANDON ~ DALAI LAMA
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luc bát - by caothang - 2018-03-29, 04:13 PM
RE: luc bát - by caothang - 2018-03-29, 04:14 PM
RE: luc bát - by TayNinh - 2018-03-29, 04:57 PM
RE: luc bát - by SugarBabe - 2018-03-29, 05:22 PM
RE: luc bát - by TamMuội - 2018-03-29, 06:16 PM
RE: luc bát - by DesertFlower - 2018-03-29, 06:51 PM
RE: luc bát - by Anh_Điếc - 2018-03-29, 05:41 PM
RE: luc bát - by anatta - 2018-03-29, 06:49 PM
RE: luc bát - by DesertFlower - 2018-03-29, 06:53 PM
RE: luc bát - by Phương Vy - 2018-03-29, 06:57 PM
RE: luc bát - by DesertFlower - 2018-03-29, 06:59 PM
RE: luc bát - by caothang - 2018-03-29, 09:50 PM
RE: luc bát - by caothang - 2018-03-29, 09:56 PM
RE: luc bát - by anatta - 2018-03-30, 02:36 PM
RE: luc bát - by ngap_ruoi - 2018-03-30, 05:40 PM
RE: luc bát - by TayNinh - 2018-03-30, 05:51 PM
RE: luc bát - by ngap_ruoi - 2018-03-30, 06:09 PM
RE: luc bát - by TamMuội - 2018-03-30, 07:28 PM
RE: luc bát - by anatta - 2018-03-31, 09:42 PM
RE: luc bát - by OldGuy - 2018-04-01, 12:10 AM
RE: luc bát - by TayNinh - 2018-03-29, 07:04 PM
RE: luc bát - by DesertFlower - 2018-03-29, 07:10 PM
RE: luc bát - by TayNinh - 2018-03-29, 07:19 PM
RE: luc bát - by cook1 - 2018-03-29, 07:46 PM
RE: luc bát - by RungHoang - 2018-03-29, 08:08 PM
RE: luc bát - by anatta - 2018-03-29, 07:07 PM
RE: luc bát - by DesertFlower - 2018-03-29, 07:12 PM
RE: luc bát - by anatta - 2018-03-29, 07:16 PM
RE: luc bát - by DesertFlower - 2018-03-29, 07:18 PM
RE: luc bát - by Phương Vy - 2018-03-29, 07:23 PM
RE: luc bát - by anatta - 2018-03-30, 02:31 PM
RE: luc bát - by Nhiều Chuyện - 2018-03-30, 03:42 PM
RE: luc bát - by ngap_ruoi - 2018-03-30, 06:04 PM
RE: luc bát - by Nhiều Chuyện - 2018-03-30, 08:00 PM
RE: luc bát - by caothang - 2018-03-30, 08:22 PM
RE: luc bát - by ngap_ruoi - 2018-03-30, 11:42 PM
RE: luc bát - by TamMuội - 2018-03-31, 12:14 AM
RE: luc bát - by ngap_ruoi - 2018-04-02, 03:40 PM
RE: luc bát - by OldGuy - 2018-04-02, 09:23 PM
RE: luc bát - by Phương Vy - 2018-04-02, 09:29 PM
RE: luc bát - by OldGuy - 2018-04-02, 09:39 PM
RE: luc bát - by ngap_ruoi - 2018-04-03, 12:56 PM
RE: luc bát - by ngap_ruoi - 2018-04-03, 12:23 PM
RE: luc bát - by Bella - 2018-03-29, 07:55 PM
RE: luc bát - by Be 3 - 2018-03-29, 08:05 PM
RE: luc bát - by DesertFlower - 2018-03-29, 08:29 PM
RE: luc bát - by Be 3 - 2018-03-29, 08:32 PM
RE: luc bát - by ngap_ruoi - 2018-03-30, 11:42 PM
RE: luc bát - by caothang - 2018-04-24, 10:06 AM
RE: luc bát - by caothang - 2018-04-24, 02:07 PM
RE: luc bát - by caothang - 2018-04-24, 03:52 PM