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2018-03-29, 06:53 PM
(2018-03-29, 06:49 PM)anatta Wrote: Lục bát hoàng phái... là gì, bạn caothang?

Tiện dịp tôi tập tành vài câu.


Yêu em tôi tập làm thơ
Thơ tình chưa thấy nhưng tim vật vờ
Dáng em thanh tựa sương mây
Tôi mơ là gió tà tà cùng em.

:-)

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Yêu em tôi tập làm thơ
Thơ tình chưa thấy vật vờ con tim
Dáng em thanh tựa sương đêm
Tôi mơ là gió cùng em tà tà
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luc bát - by caothang - 2018-03-29, 04:13 PM
RE: luc bát - by caothang - 2018-03-29, 04:14 PM
RE: luc bát - by TayNinh - 2018-03-29, 04:57 PM
RE: luc bát - by SugarBabe - 2018-03-29, 05:22 PM
RE: luc bát - by TamMuội - 2018-03-29, 06:16 PM
RE: luc bát - by DesertFlower - 2018-03-29, 06:51 PM
RE: luc bát - by Anh_Điếc - 2018-03-29, 05:41 PM
RE: luc bát - by anatta - 2018-03-29, 06:49 PM
RE: luc bát - by DesertFlower - 2018-03-29, 06:53 PM
RE: luc bát - by Phương Vy - 2018-03-29, 06:57 PM
RE: luc bát - by DesertFlower - 2018-03-29, 06:59 PM
RE: luc bát - by caothang - 2018-03-29, 09:50 PM
RE: luc bát - by caothang - 2018-03-29, 09:56 PM
RE: luc bát - by anatta - 2018-03-30, 02:36 PM
RE: luc bát - by ngap_ruoi - 2018-03-30, 05:40 PM
RE: luc bát - by TayNinh - 2018-03-30, 05:51 PM
RE: luc bát - by ngap_ruoi - 2018-03-30, 06:09 PM
RE: luc bát - by TamMuội - 2018-03-30, 07:28 PM
RE: luc bát - by anatta - 2018-03-31, 09:42 PM
RE: luc bát - by OldGuy - 2018-04-01, 12:10 AM
RE: luc bát - by TayNinh - 2018-03-29, 07:04 PM
RE: luc bát - by DesertFlower - 2018-03-29, 07:10 PM
RE: luc bát - by TayNinh - 2018-03-29, 07:19 PM
RE: luc bát - by cook1 - 2018-03-29, 07:46 PM
RE: luc bát - by RungHoang - 2018-03-29, 08:08 PM
RE: luc bát - by anatta - 2018-03-29, 07:07 PM
RE: luc bát - by DesertFlower - 2018-03-29, 07:12 PM
RE: luc bát - by anatta - 2018-03-29, 07:16 PM
RE: luc bát - by DesertFlower - 2018-03-29, 07:18 PM
RE: luc bát - by Phương Vy - 2018-03-29, 07:23 PM
RE: luc bát - by anatta - 2018-03-30, 02:31 PM
RE: luc bát - by Nhiều Chuyện - 2018-03-30, 03:42 PM
RE: luc bát - by ngap_ruoi - 2018-03-30, 06:04 PM
RE: luc bát - by Nhiều Chuyện - 2018-03-30, 08:00 PM
RE: luc bát - by caothang - 2018-03-30, 08:22 PM
RE: luc bát - by ngap_ruoi - 2018-03-30, 11:42 PM
RE: luc bát - by TamMuội - 2018-03-31, 12:14 AM
RE: luc bát - by ngap_ruoi - 2018-04-02, 03:40 PM
RE: luc bát - by OldGuy - 2018-04-02, 09:23 PM
RE: luc bát - by Phương Vy - 2018-04-02, 09:29 PM
RE: luc bát - by OldGuy - 2018-04-02, 09:39 PM
RE: luc bát - by ngap_ruoi - 2018-04-03, 12:56 PM
RE: luc bát - by ngap_ruoi - 2018-04-03, 12:23 PM
RE: luc bát - by Bella - 2018-03-29, 07:55 PM
RE: luc bát - by Be 3 - 2018-03-29, 08:05 PM
RE: luc bát - by DesertFlower - 2018-03-29, 08:29 PM
RE: luc bát - by Be 3 - 2018-03-29, 08:32 PM
RE: luc bát - by ngap_ruoi - 2018-03-30, 11:42 PM
RE: luc bát - by caothang - 2018-04-24, 10:06 AM
RE: luc bát - by caothang - 2018-04-24, 02:07 PM
RE: luc bát - by caothang - 2018-04-24, 03:52 PM