... phá basic PS
(2020-07-26, 10:44 AM)lãng Wrote: Ừa, có thể viết la đà, ... phất phới, lạch phạch không có chất thơ  Rollin

Thí dụ:

Tóc em theo gió la đà
Từ bên west coast tình xa ngút ngàn
Tôi mơ làm giọt nắng vàng
Rơi bờ tóc ấy dịu dàng chiều hôm   Grinning-face-with-smiling-eyes4

Vậy là khi mình viết thơ, tìm ý trước hay tìm vần trước?
Tôi chọn cuộc sống cho mình hạnh phúc 
chứ không phải sống để người khác ngưỡng mộ!
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... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-24, 03:58 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-24, 04:17 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-24, 04:29 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-24, 04:40 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-24, 04:54 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Lục Tuyết Kỳ - 2020-07-24, 05:49 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-24, 06:08 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Lục Tuyết Kỳ - 2020-07-24, 06:21 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Ninh Van - 2020-07-24, 11:37 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-24, 04:58 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-24, 05:02 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-24, 05:09 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-24, 05:18 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-24, 06:17 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by SugarBabe - 2020-07-24, 05:24 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Ech - 2020-07-24, 05:27 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-24, 05:30 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Ech - 2020-07-24, 05:45 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by SugarBabe - 2020-07-24, 05:31 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-24, 05:41 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-24, 06:12 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Saolấplánh - 2020-07-24, 08:29 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-24, 08:36 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Saolấplánh - 2020-07-24, 08:39 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-24, 08:48 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-24, 09:40 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Saolấplánh - 2020-07-24, 09:56 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-24, 10:01 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-24, 09:58 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-24, 10:07 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Saolấplánh - 2020-07-24, 10:14 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-24, 10:21 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-24, 10:16 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-24, 10:23 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-24, 10:35 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-24, 10:40 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Ech - 2020-07-24, 10:41 PM
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RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-24, 10:51 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Ninh Van - 2020-07-24, 11:38 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Ngại đạn. - 2020-07-25, 12:56 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-25, 09:45 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-25, 09:49 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-25, 09:52 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Ninh Van - 2020-07-25, 10:14 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Saolấplánh - 2020-07-24, 10:22 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-24, 10:25 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Saolấplánh - 2020-07-24, 10:28 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-24, 10:29 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Saolấplánh - 2020-07-24, 10:33 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Saolấplánh - 2020-07-24, 10:45 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-24, 10:50 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-24, 10:49 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-24, 10:52 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-24, 10:56 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Ninh Van - 2020-07-24, 11:41 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-25, 05:59 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-25, 09:39 AM
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RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-25, 08:15 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-25, 09:42 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-25, 09:48 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Ninh Van - 2020-07-25, 10:17 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-25, 10:26 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Ninh Van - 2020-07-25, 10:31 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-25, 10:52 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-25, 12:15 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Ech - 2020-07-25, 10:30 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Ninh Van - 2020-07-25, 10:32 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-25, 02:38 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-25, 03:05 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Saolấplánh - 2020-07-25, 03:24 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-25, 03:29 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Saolấplánh - 2020-07-25, 03:32 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-25, 03:42 PM
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RE: ... phá basic PS - by Saolấplánh - 2020-07-25, 02:47 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-25, 03:28 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-25, 04:45 PM
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RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-25, 06:25 PM
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RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-25, 06:48 PM
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RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-25, 06:47 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-25, 06:53 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-25, 06:59 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-25, 07:59 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-25, 09:10 PM
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RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-25, 09:51 PM
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RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-25, 10:12 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-25, 10:31 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-26, 08:37 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Ninh Van - 2020-07-26, 09:17 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-26, 09:22 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Ninh Van - 2020-07-26, 09:43 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-26, 11:40 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-26, 09:42 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-26, 10:14 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Ech - 2020-07-26, 10:18 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Ninh Van - 2020-07-26, 10:20 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-26, 10:27 AM
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RE: ... phá basic PS - by SugarBabe - 2020-07-26, 05:54 PM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-26, 10:29 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by Ninh Van - 2020-07-26, 10:24 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by TeaOla - 2020-07-26, 10:30 AM
RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-26, 10:44 AM
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RE: ... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-26, 11:10 AM
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