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2020-07-26, 10:14 AM
(2020-07-26, 09:42 AM)TeaOla Wrote: Trò của thầy cũng biết viết thơ đó nha, mạch lạt hay không tuỳ người đọc Rolling-on-the-floor-laughing4

Áo em vạt ngắn vạt dài
Đong đưa với gió tóc dài ngang vai
Mai này áo mãi tung bay
Lung lay trong nắng hay hay má hồng
Hạ về hoa lá trổ bông
Tóc em rũ rượi bềnh bồng như mây
Hai tà vời nắng đong đầy
Em đây ướm thử cho đầy ước mơ

Ps: Mượn của thầy 4 chữ “ Hai tà vời nắng” :D

Cũng khá lắm trò cô nương.
Nếu cần thầy chỉ thêm thì bài thơ sẽ hay hơn. Giống như em xài chữ "tóc em rũ rượi" đọc tới là giật mình liền à ...  Wink
Muốn học làm thơ và PS luôn không  Rollin
Xin cho bốn mùa đất trời lặng gió ... ... từng giọt sương thu yêu em thật thà (TCS)
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... phá basic PS - by lãng - 2020-07-24, 03:58 PM
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