[Sophie]

Here's how I feel when looking at the picture  

Một chiếc lá trơ trọi
Lay động theo gió trên nền tuyết
Tâm tư chợt thấm lạnh

"It is the soul that sees, and not the eyes."  Descartes

Đọc xong cảm thấy lạnh người …

Em vẫn chưa viết được thơ haiku kiểu này:

 "…focus on a brief moment in time, juxtaposing two images, and creating a sudden sense of enlightenment."

"...The subject is not merely nature, but nature combined or juxtaposed with human nature."

"...uses just a few words to capture a moment and create a picture in the reader's mind."

"...a way of looking at the physical world and seeing something deeper, like the very nature of existence. It should leave the reader with a strong feeling or impression."


I like these haiku poems:

I like to wash,
the dust of this world
In the droplets of dew.
― Matsuo Bashō

Over the wintry
Forest, winds howl in rage
With no leaves to blow.
― Natsume Sōseki

A world of dew,
And within every dewdrop
A world of struggle.
― Kobayashi Issa

"The last winter leaves
Clinging to the black branches
Explode into birds."